Thursday, October 2, 2014

" If Only"

 ''If only '' is about a girl named  Corinna .  Corinna has been threw a lot  because her mother passed away from cancer , now that she's returning back to school she feels upset ,depressed, and awkward with other students .    She has the best friend she has since day one . She's still there for her , she tries her hardest to make Corinna forget and maker her think about something else .

Corinna ;  muscular and outgoing
I think she's muscular and outgoing because she went threw a lot and still made it threw her mom's death .

2 comments:

  1. Aracely, this is a good start. Try to stay away from physical descriptions of characters, and more on their personality traits. Then, give specific examples from the text to prove why you see them this way.

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